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Hi, my name is Alexis and first i'm gonna tell you about my pets. I have 2 cats one named Mittens and the other Sprinkles. I used to have a puppy he was a Spoodle but he was too troubling so we had to give him to a better family. And I also have a parrot called Fred. Last of all I have a Turtle called jawsey. My name backwards is sixela! Now i'll tell you about my siblings , I have a brother called Braiden a sister called sophee and a step sister called Kylah.
Kia ora Alexis,
ReplyDeleteI love this because I have a lot of pets as well and I really enjoyed reading about yours especially about Mittens and Sprinkles.
Did you know my cats names are Bilbo Teapot and Missy, they are very fluffy and not so friendly.
Next time you could add some really cool describing words to help paint a picture in my head of what your cats look like.
Why did you put your last name into this writing as that is a bit too much private information?
Nga mihi,
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Hello Alexis
ReplyDeletemy name is Lily
I love this because you told me all about yourself and my favorite part about your writing was when you told me about your pets!
Did you know i’ve got three cats their names are Frisbee (she's a girl) Monza (he's a boy) and Diesel (he’s a boy as well!)
Next time you could use more describing words.
Why did you decided to write about yourself?
I did it so people could know a little bit about me
Deletehi alexis my name is trinity.I love this because you have a lot of pets like i do and you like animals like me.
ReplyDeleteDid you know that my cats names are jazz pixie saphy phenix and ravyn.
Next time you could maybe describe your animals more.
Why did you tell us your last name that is a little to much private information.
I love this because you wrote about your pets and siblings.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I have a cat too.
Next time you could tell more about your parrot.
Why did three siblings as well.
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DeleteI love this because you Wrote about Your pet’s and siblings.
ReplyDeleteDid you know I have a Puppy too And his name is Zepher.
Next time you could describe More about your pets look like.
How much siblings do you have?
I have 3 thank you for commenting
DeleteBonjour Alexis
ReplyDeleteI love this because your pets names are really creative and they sound really cute i wish i could meet them in person.
Did you know i really like all kinds of animals.
Next time you could tell me a little more about your turtle.
Why did you include your siblings in this piece of writing?
Astalavista Alexis
Because people should know a bit about me
Deletekie Ora I love this because i have a cat too his name is beans he is fat and lazy and very fluffy.
ReplyDeleteDid you know i love sprinkles so i really like your cats name!
Next time you could add more detail to your writing.
Why did you talk about you pets and siblings and not about you because you were
Writing about yourself ?
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HI Alexis
ReplyDeleteMy name is Charlotte
I love this because It sounds like you have a lot of animals.
Did you know I have a sister as wall I also have a puppy his name is Oakley he is a cocker spaniel he is black and white I also LOVE ANIMALS.
Next time you could use some more smileys about your animals.
Why did you put your last name in your story. do you like any sport because you can put that in your story?
thank you for letting me read your story
I love this because it tells us more about you and your family
ReplyDeleteDid you know i have a cat to called Coco
Next time you could tell us more about Fred
Why did you want to get a parrot?
Hi Bella sorry it has been a while I dont usually read my comments.
DeleteBella is my favourite name!
I have a dog called coco
I wanted a parrot because you can teach it tricks and teach it to talk.
I love this because you are telling us about your family.
ReplyDeleteDid you know your detail is great .
Next time you could tell us more about you.
Why did you tell us about this?
Hi Alexis
ReplyDeletethis is amazing because I used to have a cat called sprinkles.
Did you know i love puppies and birds too.
Next time you could add more detail about your cats.
Why did you decide to write about your pets?